Before and After

Before—photo is an earlier reference, color is a little off

Problem #6: 

Rivers Edge Path

oil on canvas, 11x14", with palette knife

This was done as a demo at Rivers Edge Elementary School. When I got home I finished it, but I was never happy with it. It just felt too flat, too cut-out. I sat on it for a few years, and had decided to trash it, when I thought, "Let me try just touching up a few areas. WELL, there were more than a few areas, but the overall effect was much more pleasing to my eye. I made the trees less 'stick-like', added leaves on the ground, changed the path and made a hill where it could disappear.

      I added a lot more branches, even down the trunks. 

    Added leaves... a lot more leaves.

    I softened this edge at the trees

sketch of Bannister's painting Under the Oaks

My painting, based on the sketch of Edward Bannister's painting. oil on canvas, 9x12"

Problem #4: 

Blue Ridge Mountains, Clouds and Field

oil on canvas, 8x10", with palette knife

I never had a problem with this painting; what I DID have a problem with was the foreground in the photograph. Part of the grass had been cut, and I certainly did not want to paint part of a mowed lawn and gravel! So, I used the information for wild grasses that were in other areas of the field, and made it look like I would want it to look like! I am reminded of a statement an artist once made, when a student commented on how beautiful his paintings were, and how lucky he was because he has such gorgeous vistas to paint (in this case, refering to the fact that he lived on a Mediterranean island). He turned to her and said, "You don't think it LOOKED like that, do you? I made it look that good!" That is not bragging; that is just what. we. do. 

Problem #3: 

New Point Comfort, High Tide

oil on canvas, 12x24", with palette knife

I orginally went to this site to just take photographs, because of time constraints. But the day was so beautiful, I decided to at least paint a few samples of color and texture. I always have paint and some kind of surface in my car. This day I had some scraps of primed canvas (I have no idea why). The back of my car (hatch lifted) became my easel. 


I am so glad I did this, because when I got back to the studio the photographs were not like the paints. Even the photo I took on sight comparing my painting sample to the sight showed a difference--but when I looked at the same view with my EYES, the canvas and the view were identical. 

After Edward Bannister's "Under the Oaks"

oil on canvas, 9x12", with palette knife

Problem #5: 

I have been fascinated by the idea that the only visual reference to Bannister’s first place painting at the Philadelphia Centennial Exhibition in 1876 was a sketch he did. I used this sketch, and some of his paintings, to create a facsimile of this large painting, which was described as being 4x5'. You can read more about his painting on my page "African American Artists" here.

This one, on the other hand, required NO tweaking! Painted between the swipes of the windshield wipers during a rainstorm, the city appeared and then disappeared in the rain, which made it a challenge to capture. But when it was done, it was done!


The greatest challenge was getting that muddy look to the water without having it LOOK like mud!

Richmond from Rockett's Landing, Rainstorm, oil on linen, 6x8"

When I finished this painting and got it back home, there were a few areas that were problematic for me. While none of these might have bothered others, I could not ignore them. These changes were made after the paint was dry to the touch, about 3 days.


• The first thing I did was to lightly glaze over the area of the cloud cover near the horizon (behind the buildings) with a slightly darker grey paint, using a brush. The buildings were much more prominent when I was looking at them, and that was because the sky was darker against them. I couldn't make the white WHITER, but I could make the area around them DARKER. I used my oil paint mixed with Gamblin's Solvent-Free Gel. Beside making the buildings more prominent, this is a tiny bit more dramatic. 


• I used the same glaze mixture to put darker areas in the water. The water was that light, but in the painting it did not read well. I put in enough dark areas to tie them togehter (but still have the water look lighter than the sky, which it did).


• To brighten up the sky, I added a TOUCH of lemon yellow to white, then put that over a few lit areas in the clouds. I didn't want the clouds to look yellow, just brighter. I also added the suggestion of a free-floating lower cloud with a knife.


• The buildings looked like they were from Alice in Wonderland. I used a bit of glaze and a knife to clean up the edges. Sometimes this takes a brush.


All of these adjustments took less than an hour, but I feel like they made all the difference in the world. Note that in the site photo, the sky is much bluer--by the time I had finished the painting, the clouds were clearing (hence the title).

Problem #2: 

New Point Comfort, That Time of the Day III

oil on canvas, 30x40", with palette knife

I worked on this painting over the course of a month, which is much different than my usual method. Normally, I finish a large painting in 2-3 marathon sessions. I think this fragmented approach caused the value issue in the sky. I worked on the left corner first, then later worked on the center, and almost a month later finished the right side. Never again!  FYI, the horizon with water and clouds was painted first, then the sky (over a month), and finally  the ground. Only after it was all finished could I see just how 'off' the sky was. 

Problem #1: 

Contrary to popular belief, an artist does not always make 'perfect' creations the first time around. Sometimes they require minor adjustments to make them satisfactory to the artist. Sometimes, it becomes a major undertaking. Sometimes, there is no fixing...

Richmond from Rockett's Landing—Clouds Clearing

oil on linen panel, 8x8", with palette knife

Before and After—

They don't always end up perfect the first time...